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"I don't know about this. Doesn't it seem kinda strange going out like this for fun?" a young woman asked.
"Sure Maylene! Why wouldn't it be?" her friend Liu replied. Maylene was a gorgeous stout woman that was stocky and had full faint pink lips. She was made up of firm muscle and soft curves, having a formidable front and wavy black hair. A small beauty mark rested above her mouth, complimenting her seeming islander heritage.
Liu on the other hand was average height, half Japanese and was very fair with her slender body and wistful face and hair. She had more richly colored lips and her slightly slanted eyes were distinctly charming and alluring. Her hair consisted of dark brown and black streaks which reached her shoulder blades. Together they were a stunning pair. It had been Liu's idea to try and survive in the jungle together, clad in nothing but leapord spotted bikinis, which Liu had insisted on wearing, still enjoying the pretty clothing even when there was no one to se it.
This was unwise however, as they had no tools to help them, save for a wallet with some information about them that Maylene had tucked into the side of her bikini bottom.

Maylene sighed, not enjoying the jungle as much as her friend. She prefered teasing staring boys with her charming looks and body, able to make them salivate. She enjoyed being a tease! But she owed Liu, and here they were.
"Oh alright sassy! We'll take a break right here for now. How's that sound?" Liu offered.
"I'm gonna sit down and die now." Maylene said sarcastically, sitting at the base of a nearby tree and closing her eyes. She folded her hands over her stomach and rested.  Liu wasn't content to simply sit though. She was enjoying this too much! She curiously scampered off a short distance away.
Both however were oblivious to the fact that they were being stalked. Just above them they were being watched by a pair of large, luminous yellow eyes. Silently, the mighty serpent of the jungle, Kaa, pushed his head through the leaves of the tree canopy to better observe the morsels. He was very hard to see, even though he was close by, because he blended in so well with the trees. Despite his amazing length and girth, his camoflauge kept him well hidden.
Kaa sized up Liu, his long pink forked tongue tasting the air, and then curling around his scaly lips.  His eyes narrowed sinisterly, and then looked at the snoozing Maylene, who was at the base of his tree. He was able to appreciate her curves, although not in the same way human males did. Kaa hissed quietly, pleased that two such delicacies were in his territory.

Yes, both would make delightful meals... but who should he take first? He considered for a moment. Maylene was closer, and would be absurdly easy to capture and eat while Liu was away, but that left the risk of Liu leaving while he was busy. Liu was farther away and might wake her friend. But if he could take Liu quietly, then there was nothing stopping him from taking her friend right after quietly. He wouldn't have to worry about her immediately. He decided firmly to go for Liu first. Kaa smiled his wide, scaly, seductive smile at her and slowly began to slither her way. The sun was beginning to set, giving him an even greater advantage.

Liu was about 40 feet away from the snoozing Maylene, and was looking closely at the plants and small animals that scurried around the jungle floor. A light sweat had built on her slender body, the jungle being very hot and humid, even with the sun going down. She was bent over, looking at a particular flower close to the ground. Kaa used the distraction to slowly lower his head down near her own, waiting for her to simply look up. He had to take her quietly as possible though, with no struggle. He didn't want the other tasty girl to wake up and interfere or get away. When Liu looked up her eyes widened, staring right at the thick head and neck of Kaa. His head was a bit bigger than her own, signifying just how easy it would be to swallow her slim body...
Kaa smiled widely at her, hoping to throw her off as he began his signature hypnosis...
Liu opened her mouth to call out, to warn Maylene and get help, but after half a moment of staring at the swirling colors, all that came out was a tiny squeak.
She had to do something! She had to escape, to warn her friend and... and... She struggled to think about what she had to do. She had once tried to stay up for 36 hours straight, and almost half way through had trouble simply keeping her mind on one subject coherently. Her mind would continue to wander like water in a stream, and her eyes would close without her even knowing it. This was very similar to that, even though she didn't realize it.
"Uhh... uhn..." Liu muttered almost pitifully, trying to find her voice as her pretty eyes were consumed with hypnotic spirals. Kaa smiled, finding that he had her snared. He couldn't help but play with his meal a bit though. Kaa had learned that his prey, once caught in his hypnotic grasp like now, were unable to look away. Kaa then slowly swooned his head to the left, quietly chuckling. Sure enough, Liu's head followed, her eyes bubbling with spirals.
Then, more quickly, Kaa swooned his head to the right, forcing Liu to move her head that way as well. Kaa chuckled, enjoying his toying.

Liu's mind was muddled and confused. What was she doing again? What did she need? What was happening? What... what was her name? Liu searched her mind, trying to recover such a simple fact, but it came up blank. The wheels in her head turned slower and slower, like syrup in the cold. He cute mouth hung slack open, and her ringed eyes began to wander somewhat, as if both her eyes were now lazy. Her arms dangled limply at her sides as if she had no control over them, while her legs wobbled slightly.
Kaa now whispered quiet coaxing commands to her.
"Resssst little morssssel... Sssssleep... Relaxxxx... You want to sssssleep..." he whispered with his seductive lisp.
Liu half heartedly yawned, her eyelids slowly closing on her, eyes wandering more. Kaa moved his head right up to Liu's quickly, snapping her back to attention, her eyes widening quickly, the spirals spinning faster. She now looked cross-eyed, Kaa's large eyes less than an inch from her own.
"Pay attention my ssssweet..." Kaa ordered, his long tongue flicking against her lips as he spoke. Kaa extended some of his body towards her. Slowly, Kaa turned his head, making Liu turn until she had to step to face him, still standing in place.
"Yesssss... Follow my eyessss..." Kaa encouraged. He continued to circle her, making Liu turn. As she did though, Kaa had part of his body softly cling to her neck. As she turned to continue watching his eyes, she aided him in having herself coiled up. Slowly but surely, Liu began to be cocooned, having coils looped around her like thread around a spool. But she was helpless to resist.

Liu's mind was now almost completely blank, unable to do something as simple as speak for herself. She strained to keep her tired eyes open, strained so hard... but it just helped herself feel more and more tired. Somewhere far away, she felt something go around her body, but couldn't concentrate on it... She felt unbearably sleepy, as if she hadn't slept in years. Her mind was rattled with fatigue  and her body felt like lead. Her eyelids seemed determined to haul themselves shut on her, but she forced them open again and again, but seemed to only get more sleepy as she did. She wanted to see the pretty colors though... She had to obey the words being whispered to her... A quiet murmur escaped her lips, half a mumble and half a yawn. She was too tired to even yawn! Kaa giggled at her misfortune and helplessness, enjoying making her try to stay awake and move. He let his coils weigh her down, to further tire her out. He could have had her fully hypnotized earlier, but this was too much fun! He couldn't help but play with his food. A few moments later, Liu was coiled from her neck to her hips, unable to lift a mere finger. Though, she couldn't do that even if she wasn't coiled. Kaa's mind-dulling hypnosis saw to that. Liu's eyes were alight with spirals, spinning quickly in her eyes. Poor girl! She never had a chance. Not only did Kaa rob her of her ability to merely think, but to move or do anything of her own free will. Her body seemed tiny in comparrison to the massive thick coils that held her body firmly. The smallest one holding her around her neck was 5 inches thick, while some of the others were almost a foot thick! He could easily squeeze the life out of her with one contraction of his coils, but that wouldn't be any fun. No, he enjoyed how this was going. Her companion had absolutely no idea what was happening. Maylene was sleeping like a baby while her friend was in the scaly grasp of Kaa and being forced to stay awake, despite her unbearably sleepy mind. It was just too easy! Kaa wasn't even trying. He smiled to himself, enjoying his monopoly on hunting right now. Soon, Liu would be a warm bulge in his stomach.
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Hey-o!
This is the first part of a story where a pair of friends of mine meet Kaa!
I promised to make this for them before Christmas, but before that, they just dissapeared... Although they might not see this, as this is supposed to be a present for them, I hope that everyone else enjoys!
More though, I hope my 4 buddies see this and enjoy it, cuz its for you girls!
Oh, and if you do see this, sorry if I messed up your decents! Heh heh...

And to perhaps enjoy it more, lookit here!
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Listen to the music in the backround. It really helps set up the mood! Try it!

Aaaaaand... if anyone is wondering about the squiggle, its because the fracking submission thing wouldn't let me submit the story without something in there. Kinda pisses me off...
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Mood: Joy =mewt66 Aug 12, 2010  Professional General Artist
that was so cool i cant wait till the next part of the story
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~Diamond-Rainbow Mar 12, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
haha awesome job ;) I didnt read this one before but now that I have it's really cool :D
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:iconpredator755:
I'm glad you like it! :D
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~Diamond-Rainbow Mar 21, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
haha no prob ;) :hug:
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:iconsnakecoils1322:
Do more do more do more!
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:iconpredator755:
Heh, i might!
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:iconsnakecoils1322:
hope so. if you do, tell me! Thanks
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:iconpredator755:
Heh, I'll consider it!
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:icongriffinsummoner:
Looking forward to the next part, hoping Kaa will finish with Liu and move on to taking his time with Maylene.
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:iconpredator755:
I'm working on the next one at this very moment!
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